Modern Vespa

Rex's excellent warning label (mentioned recently in these two threads) inspired me to try creating an mp3 silhouette and then beg Rex to add an mp3 version to his Cafe Press store.

I'm not entirely satisfied with the results, but being the art and design know-nothing that I am, I don't know how to improve it.  Do you any of you clueful people have ideas to make this silhouette better?

Edit: Now that I have it posted, it doesn't seem so bad, but maybe that's just because I'm getting used to it (and I have no taste)?  The request for feedback stands.

stick some cross-bones between the front wheels for the 'pirate' look !!

I like it

My two cents worth:

Try raising the wheels up to where they almost touch on the bottom, and on top add the handlebars on either side.

It kind of looks like darth vader and a grey alien had a baby, and the wheels look like car seat belt straps.

Maybe if you made the windscreen just an outline rather than filled in....

Astromags, thanks!  Raising the wheels has improved it a lot, I think.  (I had meant to include the handlebars to begin with and just flat forgot.) 

Drop the wheels add cross bones and you have a bad ass pirate/mp3 flag.

I'd say you've got it!

I 2nd that.The last silhouette is it!

Yep, less darth vaderish, much better.

I like it with the clear windscreen , but what happened to the 3rd wheel?

Woot!  Thanks everyone for the responses.  I couldn't have done it without the help.

I have a PM off to Rex.  We'll see what he thinks.

I don't think it quite works this way, but here it is with the clear windscreen and rear wheel, for anyone who wants a complete set.

I like it! 8) I think it needs the 3rd wheel to be 'coded' as MP3-- but maybe do the top of it rounded/separate like the front 2?